Saturday, April 23, 2011

I-poems: Rain

II

In the rain you looked for me,
And cried desperately,
By not finding me.
I was not the rain,
But the moisture lining your,
Footsteps on the cold floor. 

12 comments:

Chippy Johnson said...

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Unknown said...

nice :) it could as well have been a haiku

mohit

Neeha said...

Loved it.

Anu Lal said...

Thank you People.

Red Handed said...

great one!! touchin yet beautiful :)

Anya said...

Happy weekend or
Happy Easter to all from
Kareltje =^.^= Betsie >^.^<
Anya :)

:)

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Anu Lal said...

Thank you Red. Happy Easter Anya..hugs!

Sneha Shrivastava said...

Good one.:)

Terri said...

This one was sweet and sad at the same time to me. Great job!

Anu Lal said...

Thank you Sneha and Tia Terri.

Terri said...

I have an award for you if you choose to pick it up (smile)

Anu Lal said...

Hurray!!!!!!! hugs Tia. And thank you so much.