Monday, May 31, 2010

The Seventh Drop.



The Cure 

I shed my blood,
for you.
You shed your tears,
in love.
The salinity in your tears,
cured my wounds.
But, I could not find out,
the wound that gave tears to you.

11 comments:

BROKEN STAR (bck agn) said...

wonderfully written...real deep meaning

Anu Lal said...

Thanks pal.

Sheri said...

anulal, this is exquisite!! in the simplicity of actions, in the beauty of love.
where do you find such depth? how is it that you have paid so much attention to the dynamics around you that you write with such intensity? such lovely words, so lovely...

Anu Lal said...

Thank you Sheri. It might be the kindness of your eyes...

Clueless said...

Beautifully written and touches my heart deeply. Simply profound.

Thanks,
CC

Terri said...

Rich with meaning...I'm really enjoying this series Anu.

Anu Lal said...

Thank you.

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

very cute and beautiful poem!

Anu Lal said...

Thank you friend.

Unknown said...

nice pic

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/06/05/poetry-awards-4-week-21-participants-and-fresh-poets/

2 poetry awards,
2 general awards,
enjoy!