Tuesday, March 30, 2010

Eyes-6


"If I have to choose between loving you, and breathing, I will use my last breath to say I LOVE YOU".....Unknown.








"They say love is the ultimate gain.
It is obsession, possession, occupation.
I risked everything, felt nothing.
And became a shade for your eyes."


[to be continued...]

5 comments:

Terri said...

felt nothing? I've ready it several times and I get stuck...right there...it that the intent?
I'm sorry Me Ho but this one went over me...perhaps you can write me and give me the inside scoop as to it's true meaning.(smile)

Anu Lal said...

Felt nothing- is a feeling of indifference one feels when one's beloved shows no interest in him and in his life. Then there is no choice for the lover other than to give up his obsession and all the other wonderful feelings of being in love.

BROKEN STAR (bck agn) said...

well..this one touched my heart....amazin

Terri said...

So if I got this right for this poem..."I" risked everything.... all the obsession... all the possession.... all the occupation...and the beloved whoever that happens to be felt nothing. And "I" is reduced to nothing more than a pair of sunglasses or shades for the others eyes....very deep my friend very deep.
Thanks for the added insight.

Anu Lal said...

You got it dear!!