I shed my blood,
for you.
You shed your tears,
in love.
The salinity in your tears,
cured my wounds.
But, I could not find out,
the wound that gave tears to you.
anulal, this is exquisite!! in the simplicity of actions, in the beauty of love. where do you find such depth? how is it that you have paid so much attention to the dynamics around you that you write with such intensity? such lovely words, so lovely...
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wonderfully written...real deep meaning
Thanks pal.
anulal, this is exquisite!! in the simplicity of actions, in the beauty of love.
where do you find such depth? how is it that you have paid so much attention to the dynamics around you that you write with such intensity? such lovely words, so lovely...
Thank you Sheri. It might be the kindness of your eyes...
Beautifully written and touches my heart deeply. Simply profound.
Thanks,
CC
Rich with meaning...I'm really enjoying this series Anu.
Thank you.
very cute and beautiful poem!
Thank you friend.
nice pic
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/06/05/poetry-awards-4-week-21-participants-and-fresh-poets/
2 poetry awards,
2 general awards,
enjoy!
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